Wednesday, August 15, 2007

Manzil

I've never been know for my poetic excellence neither have I tried one before.

Jab manzil hai shikhar
toh kyun thakkar baith gaye
ek kadam aur badhaiye
dekhiye, manzil ke aur kareeb aa gaye.

Kitni hi badhayein aayi thi rahon mein
kintne hi thokar lage the paon mein
par honsla nahi tha dagmagaya
toh fir aaj thakan kyun hai aap ko manzil se behkaya

Jab manzil hai shikhar
toh kyun thakkar baith gaye
ek kadam aur badhaiye
dekhiye, manzil ke aur kareeb aa gaye.

jeet ab nishchit hai aapki
aap kadam toh badhaiye
manzil hai itne kareeb
thakan ko jeetne na dijiye

Jab manzil hai shikhar
toh kyun thakkar baith gaye
ek kadam aur badhaiye
dekhiye, manzil ke aur kareeb aa gaye.

sakshi hai aapke parisram ki
yeh sanse aur yeh kaya
math dijiye inhe parajay ka gam
jinhone ab tak hai saath nibhaya

Jab manzil hai shikhar
toh kyun thakkar baith gaye
ek kadam aur badhaiye
dekhiye, manzil ke aur kareeb aa gaye.

sanchit kijiye woh aakhri takat
jo ab bhi shesh hai
haarne na dijiye khud ko
iss jeet ke aap hi yogya hai

Jab manzil hai shikhar
toh kyun thakkar baith gaye
ek kadam aur badhaiye
dekhiye, manzil ke aur kareeb aa gaye.

6 comments:

  1. dilettanteAugust 15, 2007 at 7:11 PM

    nice try !! keep it up

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  2. spontaneous and random thought processorAugust 18, 2007 at 1:53 PM

    i know this poem is amateurish...

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  3. Abhishek GuptaAugust 18, 2007 at 2:22 PM

    gud gud... write more!!
    ar ki bolbo!!

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