Monday, September 24, 2007

I'm not your friend...

I'm not your friend if you think
I would fall asleep listening your dreams.

I'm not your friend if you need to
thank me for whatever I do for you.

I'm not your friend if you need to
feel sorry for not being able to help me this time.

I'm not your friend if you need to
laud me for mere achievements of mine.

I'm not your friend if you need to
give me excuses for what you did.

I'm not your friend if my presence
makes you feel uncomfortable.

I'm not your friend if you feel
like plugging your ears when I speak.

I'm not your friend if you don't
see my efforts to make you happy.

I'm not your friend if you don't
realize when I'm sad looking into my eyes.

I'm not your friend if you need
to think before sharing your sorrow with me.

I'm not your friend if you need to
remember me every time while making a list of invitees.

I'm not your friend if you hesitate
to reveal your secrets to me.

I'm not your friend if you need
to search for words to make me smile.

I'm not your friend if I need to
explain the reason of my happiness and grief.

6 comments:

  1. Good 1..though i understand a little bit of poetry's having inner meanings..urs one wasnt hard to understand..so u have developed urself in this field also

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  2. just one word.....awesome as an amateur poet !!!!

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  3. I am not your friend if i need to
    go verbal everytime, to praise yo

    I am not your friend if i never
    bothered u or u too never either

    I am not your friend if i find u
    obsequious,fawning nd so does u

    I am not your friend if i do not
    respect you for wat you are not

    I am not your friend if i mostly
    find me helping you incredibly



    I'm vr much ur friend if i missed
    going aloud in my ways, to laud

    I'm very much ur friend if i too
    get sicken everytime i upset yo

    I'm vr much ur friend if i force
    candour in my respect for yours

    I'm vr much ur friend if i hear
    hii here, before u ask hii thr??


    Yo AD!!! nice work!!! get the tempo going!!! And i hope u got my points !! Always with u ..

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  4. well done pranavjeet...
    thanx for improving my poem...
    urs is certainly much better than mine..[:)]

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  5. hmmm ... its not done then. I liked the topic, the whole concept and felt like i could add a few more lines. And thnx if u liked it, i enjoyed urs too nd thats y ended up adding a few ... In fact i think such poems always ask for more ... u can't just conclude them and.. well, it can't get any better if a friend adds a few lines in ur friendship poem ... All the best for ur future endeavours !!

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